Well, on the plus side you have accomplished a flash and are content on its quality enough to make it a submission, so good on you. But I have to say that I was not so much entertained. The "joke" was pretty weak...like dang...I was thinking there was going to be more but all I got was a repeat, not even a replay button or something. You did have camera switches so it was not just them standing beside each other. The lip syncing was there but it looks like no effort was put into it to make it look like they were saying anything coherent. You said that you have fun making this...that's good. But next time you make something and post it, think to yourself, "Will this keep the NGer's entertained?" Just a thought.
(-) Not Funny
(-) Bad lip syncing
(-) Too Short (you said that yourself)
(-) No Replay Button
(+) Camera switch
+1 - You Submitted it
+2 - The Camera Switch
I like it
I am a big fan of zombie animations and stories such as this. Your zombies acted pretty close to perfect in my mind. The only problem that I had with the zombies, was that some showed emotion and the girlfriend zombie screamed. That just my opinion on how zombies should act though. The story, although good, was a bit cliche in the whole save the girlfriend thing and the good guys bad assery. By the way, that starting scene was done awesome. I totally had that exact same scene in my mind about starting a zombie movie...just brilliant.
So in the end:
(-) Zombies not quite done right...in my opinion (screaming and emotions)
(-) A bit Cliche
(+) Great animation
(+) Great fight scenes
(+) Some humor
(+) Overall very well done.
Fun being beside you guys in a collab!
This collab was so fun to do, and I encourage others to try next time one of these comes out!
...Nice...in the load screen....I got the crotch of the robot...wonderful.
rofl...someone had to get the crotch.
It was alright
I am a fan of the site 5 second films, so I was looking forward to this collab. I am glad there was so many because out of that many, there were only a few ones that I would watch this collab again for. The "awesome" one was....well...awesome. And I just loved the "Good Times" one. The counting ones were a poor shot at humor in my opinion. Oh ya, I forget who did it, but the one with the magic trick with the baby eating is straight outta the site ( http://5secondfilms.com/v3beta/watch/
magic_show_volunteer ). You guys probably knew that, I just wanted to point out that the joke was stolen and a frown came to my face when I saw it.
Dang this collab did make me wish I would have went in it (or at least tried). Nonetheless, Everyone did a good job animating and it looks like you guys had some fun making it.
Keep up the great work!
Pretty good for tests.
It was simple. I like your tests. I was disappointed when it was over. I wouldn't mind a few more selections in this compilation. Nice use of blurs and stuff. Thank you for your pleasant ending.
I gave it a 6/ 10 because although it was interesting. They still were, just tests. I like to see structure and what not. It was like you have the ingredients for a cake and you just handed them to me expecting me to eat it. Make the cake and present it. Don't just give me these ingredients. I hope I will see many of these things tested in more movies to come.
Keep up the good work.
Well thank you! The whole point of testing stuff was to get me to a point where I felt I was familiar enough to make something decent :D. So having you tell me to "Get structured" is pretty ideal feedback.
I love you controversial animations. You're not boring and you're not afraid to show things that may upset the average viewer. Great animation style. Simple and crazy at the same time. Your main theme has gotten me addicted to Mix Master Mike! Keep up the good work!
It wasn't bad. The story is decent and it really leaves me hanging so I kind of want to watch the next part. Decent animation. It didn't change my life or anything, but it also didn't screw my life up by watching it. Keep up the good work.
Glad i didn't screw up your life. Lmao.
Your awesome at these reviews of movies. It is way more interesting to watch these than the actual movie. Nice creativity with the theme song. Keep up the good work.
It was just wonderful and a great continuation to the story. Smooth animation, love, a happy ending. GOSH!! I watched with my little sister and she definitely let out an "AWE!!!" Great Job and I hope I will see more from you.
my suggestion is that you redraw everything from scratch. Don't try to add a couple more shadings. I love the bluntness of your characters, but the animation leaves something to be desired. It has an alright story but...ya. Good Luck on your future flashes!!
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